Dawn asked:


What are some sentences to use in opening and ending a business letter? I am in college and have Business Communications class and we are doing business letters right now and I am not so good at it.
I am not aloud to use (I,me, we, us or a company name) I also have to use the YOU approach.
Would like some true help getting my mind to think in the right direction I need to be.
Only serious answers please.
I have been trying to write business letters for weeks now. I am still not getting them down pat. Always something wrong with opening mostly. I am Revising this letter that is poorly writen~
Dear Sir,
A number of office supplies items in your winter catalog interested me for my home office. Ive lost the catalog order form, so I hope I can submit my order by letter. Please send me 5 stackable letter trays, NO. 789. They cost $2.50 each. Also send 3 Premeir recycled easel pads, Item NO. 39786. Each one costs 24.98. I could also use a box(100 to the box) of your Top-load sheet protectors at $14.87 for the box of 100. Then item number is 039. And I need a box of Avery self-laminating sheets (item 798) at the price of $5.66, with 50 to a box.
I am interested in having these items charged to my credit card. Please send them quickly because Im about to run out.
Does anyone know any sites to go to that will help me with this as well.